TSP Draft Two, Book Four - Ch11
Read-aloud, pt1: https://www.tiktok.com/@kaylinrosealexander/video/7183703993787551022?is_from_webapp=1&sender_device=pc&web_id=7168171927235937835
Previous: https://kaylinrosealexande.wixsite.com/kaylinalexanderbooks/post/tsp-draft-two-book-four-ch9-10
Enjoy!
Chapter Eleven
5 Miles West, then to… Oh, Crap
Since it was the afternoon, it wasn’t hard to find west.
We borrowed some bikes and helmets (OK! Stole) from a bike shop and rode as fast as we could towards the sun.
We kept going until we reached an elementary school.
We parked our bikes next to the entrance and started to look around in the snow.
We hadn’t looked very long when we heard a gruff voice say, “Hey! What are you kids doing?”
A guy in a big black hat and jacket ran over to us. His badge said “Tim”.
“This is a holiday! School isn’t open and you shouldn’t be here!”
“We don’t even go here!” I said. “We were trying to find something.”
“Likely story,” Tim snorted. “ISS for you two!”
In School Suspension! “But I thought you said it was a holiday!” I screamed.
“I don’t care!” he said. “I just want you two out of the school lawn!”
We reluctantly followed Tim inside the school.
I couldn’t believe that we were going to ISS! It’s a holiday! It wasn’t even the right state! How were we going to find the portal now?
Chapter Twelve
ISS
And... that's how it ends. I reached writer's block. Makes sense, I changed the plot like three times already. Of course I didn't know what to do next. Thank God.
Here are some scrapped ideas for more of Draft Two that I never wrote: https://kaylinrosealexande.wixsite.com/kaylinalexanderbooks/post/the-terrible-concepts-of-tsp-draft-two
Tomorrow, I'll start posting Draft Three.
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