Short Story Excerpt: TEOS: The Search for the Ruby Necklace - Ch7

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Y'all are gonna love this chapter!

Chapter Seven

Polka-Dot Stream

The gobbie looked up from eating, gasped, and ran away.

And that's it! We finished what I have!

This entire draft has been largely OK. I like how I expanded the original fanfic so far, but still kept to the original's basic plot beats. However, it clearly needs more embellishment.

In terms of quality, it's somewhere between TSP Drafts 2 and 3, which is where I think I wrote it.

I'm still very much attached to this idea, and I will definitely expand this some day. I don't think I'll give it seven books like planned, since that's how many the Rainbow Magic series had per arc. I may just write one book.

Tomorrow, I will begin posting the next Draft.

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